The Rain in My Soul

moondustwriterJanuary 21, 2010February 4, 2013Poetryabsence, cruel, dreary, feeling, pain, rain, soul, sufferiing, world

The Rain

In My

SoulDreary

No one near
No words
To make it clear
What
I’m feeling

Is it you

Is it me?

There’s an
absence
hear my plea

I love the rain

does a thorough wash

But this rain
in my soul
I’d like to quash

It isn’t gentle
Isn’t sweet
It’s harsh
cruel pounding
leaves me
beat

I hate the feeling
unable to cure
the pains
the sufferings
that others endure

Published by moondustwriter

Thank you for visiting Moondustwriter. One of the many exciting things I've had the honor of doing is writing with an E. African team that is developing elementary curriculum for African children. As a writer, it is a thrill to help children (on all continents) who want to learn. I've been part of the blogging community for more than 10 years. Some old timers may remember the award winning (2011 Twitter Shorty ) blog community - One Stop Poetry. I was the co-producer of that fast growing blog community. I am a published writer, poet, artist and photographer. I have written, as well as edited, for periodicals, radio, blogs and fellow writers. There are many facets to this moon - thanks for stopping by. View more posts

10 thoughts on “The Rain in My Soul”

william says:

January 21, 2010 at 10:08 am

beautifully imagery packed poem, with lots to think about… loved this, you are a fabulous writer xx

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1. moondustwriter says:
  
  January 22, 2010 at 3:17 am
  
  I think your gifted with encouragement – any words i write are inspired from above so i can’t really take credit. Hugs
  
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glitteringsootonhereyelashes says:

January 21, 2010 at 7:59 pm

all i got to say is that i really hope that’s not how you’re feeling. 🙂
a beautiful, evocative poem, though. totally love it 😀

xx

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1. moondustwriter says:
  
  January 22, 2010 at 3:16 am
  
  you are so sweet. Only the rain part. Rain makes me introspective and the rain made me think of those dear folk in Haiti xoxo
  
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jingle says:

January 22, 2010 at 2:46 am

wonderful

please be relaxed, best wishes for your blog..

you are gifted..

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1. moondustwriter says:
  
  January 22, 2010 at 3:13 am
  
  thanks – the rain really inspired this poem (we don’t get much rain here in Cal.)
  
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