I loved a girl
She wasn’t pretty or fair
I’m not even sure
of the color of her hair
***
I read her on paper
that’s where I would see
a portrait of words
quietly enfolding me
***
A journey of sorts
is where we would go
nowhere had limits
places high- places low
***
I loved her because
she opened my eyes
to a world without speaking
no barriers- no lies
***
We never got closer
than Jupiter and Mars
but the fire in her eyes
drew my heart to the stars
Photo: Thanks to Miss Turner
(http://www.flickr.com/photos/missturner/2434425394/)
navicore /aka Ed Sweeney
penned in moon dust 
ah…for love of words…and love in words…
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ah love!!!!
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Wow. Very good. Loved this!
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thanks Daryl
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This poem is so beautiful. I truly love your work.
You are a gifted writer indeed.
~Keep on doin it~
Thank you for posting.
Best wishes,
Kathleen
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thanks Kathleen for your encouragment
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this is so wistful. beautiful
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thank you – it was fun to write
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what a cute love…
Happy Thursday!
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well cute but rather restriciting
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Katie Perry needs to take notes. An inspiring pleasure to read this. 🙂
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aww that’s sweet 😉
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I enjoyed the first two stanzas the best. 🙂
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glad you read it – thanks for the visit
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Ah I wanted a bit more here.
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have to wait for next time
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aw! LOVEly indeed!
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aww thanks
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Its beautiful when you can connect with a person through their words!
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glad you came by thanks
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a great write..got me going in the title but you took me on a completely different journey & was grateful..well done my friend
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well gotta mix it up – huh?
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I also write love poetry and I love this one!
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what a lovely poem. beautiful. you gave it life.
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This is so personally touching to me. I can understand the emotion and feelings in your poem. Beautiful and sensitive.
Peace,
Suzanne
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Good poem! Especially enjoyed the first and second stanza! 🙂
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Oh…what a lovely poem…it was totally beautiful…and almost made me want to write a romantic poem…oh my did I just say that out loud. 😉
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oh my you and romance – would be magnificent
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Sweet – don’t we always fall in love with assorted characters.? I see we’re reading Twilight in German… 🙂
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“I loved her because
she opened my eyes
to a world without speaking
no barriers- no lies”
~Have been so glad to have found your blog. Your writing inspires me with every post.
Much love, my ‘moonsister’! 😉
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thanks moon sis
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Great poem, very personal. I just loved it!
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You have taken us to a trip beyond the Earth’s atmosphere, I would say that this piece is “Galactically” Beautiful.
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ooo I like your explanation
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