Looking into his eyes
she wanted to comb through his thick hair.
Her fingertips stroked his cheek.
His lips conveyed unspoken love
The top button of his shirt taunted her
“unbutton me
explore”
Desires are taut.
If only he could feel her caress,
return her touch.
Would they ever be free
from his
Coma?
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This is a sad one but I like it anyway. Should I rant that you made me cry all over my keyboard and now I’ll have to buy a new one? *winks* Thanks for you visit to my 55.
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I’m thinking you buy me one I buy you one – lol
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I think ‘get well soon’ is the apprpropriate expression.
Great 55!
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well send the card in your next 55
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Sad but beautifully written.
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Thanks – gotta have some sad once in awhile
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Gee whiz, and I thghuot this would be hard to find out.
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Nice little twist at the end of this 55, didn’t expect that. :))
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Alllllllll righty then! You had me going.
My 55 is Here As always scroll down below my Friday Show N Tell. Have a great weekend!!!
Is it hot in here, or is it just me?
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love the descriptive words in action…
very provoking 55.
thank you for the talent!
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ok, you got me with that last word…i wonder is it real, this coma, or metaphor…either presents a very different yet just as sad case…nice 55 moon.
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glad I got ya!!! well I guess you are right it could be metaphoric – too bad if the guy is that far gone
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Moon Beam…?
This was very very touching.
I loved it!
Excellent 55…In fact. Perfect!
Thanks for this little Gem…You Rock.
Please have a Kick Ass Week-End…Galen
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G- Beam!!! Thanks my friend. Gonna send a Flash Fiction writer your way – Happy Friday – Kick some…
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in a earlier post death and ilenlss is something I feel like we will all face no matter what specialty we choose to work in, but oncology must see more than its fair share of sadness. I have heard from nurses and doctors that they seem to become numb to it or push it out of their minds, but I also think I would have a hard time dealing with it.
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three hanky tear-jerker! Hammer Horror for me today. My 55
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ok I’ll have a hanky on my site from now on
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Aww how sad.. I do love the hint hidden by the top button.
Love it.
Mine is up
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It’s always under that top button
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I’ve met a few guys in a coma, LOL Very thought provoking 55.
55 Flash Fiction Friday: Two Ships Passing In The Night
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you too??? and they weren’t in a hospital bed were they?
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It’s a real pleusare to find someone who can think like that
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wicked COOL!
naughty you and I like!
you are very good at this, Leslie!
I am up
hugs
shakira
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Great 55! wow, complete picture told. The comments were entertaining and revealing as well.
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wow! t’was amazing (:
to be honest, i really wasn’t expecting that twist in the end. but oooh i do love it 🙂
xxx
hugs 😀
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thanks sweetie – gotta throw it in once in awhile
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wow…sad but beautifully written:)coma???or somethin els???
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it started with temptation left with a shadow of sadness. beautiful piece.
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a little hope still there (I’m hoping)
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Wow. Crazy.
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every one likes the spin on that
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