You know that
the zero is in
it’s on you
where time ticks
it’s already tomorrow
that single second
This is part of an exercise in Shadorma. Join us at One Stop Poetry Form as we try our hand at form each week.
You know that
the zero is in
it’s on you
where time ticks
it’s already tomorrow
that single second
This is part of an exercise in Shadorma. Join us at One Stop Poetry Form as we try our hand at form each week.
Learning to live by the indwelling life of Christ.
Gud skaper noko nytt ved sitt Ord og sin Ande, vi kan ta imot det i tru og få oppleve at han gjer sitt verk med oss. Hans skaparkraft verkar konstuktivt i våre liv og skaper noko som er verdifullt for oss. Naturkreftene verkar nedebrytande, i fylgje entropilova, men Gud er Ånd og det som er født av hans Ande består. Jesu frelsesverk er fullbrakt og fullkome. Han er den siste Adam, som er ifrå himmelen og som for oss har vorte ei livgjevande ånd. Han gjev oss den Heilage Ande frå himmelen av berre nåde. Han gjev oss det evige livet.
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I like the last sentence as it shows the value of a second and the urgency that goes with it. Lovely poem.
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Excellent use of form—concise lines, full of meaning.
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Time is like that… relentless, oppressive… and oh, how it passes. Enjoyed reading your shadorma. So grateful I found this form today, too!
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A second holds the key, the limbo where tomrrow becomes today becomes a yesterday! Love the enigma that the zero is “in” and “on you”! Beautiful!
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Beautifully done!
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It’s always tomorrow somewhere 😉 Nice shadorma!
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I had never heard of this form, but I am enjoying it so much and I loved your take on the seconds of time.
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Very nicely done!
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fascinating thing time;according toquantum physics, if you were riding on the back of a photon, there would be no time, no time would pass, and so there would be no distance either, no time, no distance, all that ever was, is and will be, all wrapped up in the here and now!
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I love it when you speak astrophysics sis
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Never would have thunk I would find this so iniepsdnsable.
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Just thinking how quickly 2011 is passing and how much I have to do. Tightly knit take on that elusive dimension.
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Great. Each line was sharp and clear and demonstrates the power of a second.
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I like that – sounds so urgent.
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I actually considered moving to the International Date Line once, to be always first in the world, but soon found out it’s a rather watery place to live.
So have to be content with being “ahead” in my mind. But that’s okay — my mind’s a great place to hang out.
xoox
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Very nice.
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Time never stops for anyone…
aeons
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