Why did he leave ??? #FlashFiction

She opened her eyes that morning

all traces of him were gone…


she thought that the relationship was moving forward to a commitment

Three years  later she read :

“Human Skull discovered in local irrigation ditch.”

The headline went on to state that  a dog unearthed the skull

A tear fell from her eye…


Thanks to the illustrious G-Man who hosts Friday 55 Flash Fiction. Join us as we write fiction in 55 words.

Author: moondustwriter

Thank you for visiting Moondustwriter. One of the many exciting things I've had the honor of doing is writing and publishing in multiple genres (including education) in E. African for E. Africa. As a writer, it is a thrill to write for children (on all continents) who want to learn. I've been part of the blogging community for more than 13 years. Some old timers may remember the award winning (2011 Twitter Shorty ) blog community - One Stop Poetry. I was the co-producer of that fast growing blog community. I am a published writer, poet, artist and photographer. I have written, as well as edited, for periodicals, radio, blogs and fellow writers. There are many facets to this moon - my joy is in meeting you!

22 thoughts on “Why did he leave ??? #FlashFiction”

  1. Why did he leave you? Gosh, I don’t know. But it was definitely a mistake on his part. R.I.P. A really good ’55’. Have not been here in a while, it seems. You write good.


    1. I think it’s funny to read responses. I read the headline in a paper in Oregon this week. The wheels in my mind are moving


  2. Uh MDW…..?
    This Dark Thing just won’t go away will it?
    Thats ok…Any Genre you choose, You Excell in it!
    Fantastic 55 Mon Amie.
    Thanks for playing, Happy Birthday to YOU, and have a Kick Ass Week-End..


      1. Kevin,It has been a long time I really enjoy your web page. Other than the years that have flown by you prtety much look the same.I have been married for 7 yrs and live in Antelope, CA, and have two adopted kids. Ashley is 18 and will be going to Sac State and Justin will be 17 and a Senior in HS this year.Man, your Home Depot story was good My wife had gone through the Home Depot for a landscaping project to add some pavers to our backyard, and were a little concerned about it, but the work was proformed by Barazani Turned out beautiful! Just look at it this way, your deck looks real good.Gregold O.L.L.L buddy


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