LOCAL CREW UNCOVERS HUMAN SKULL
The headlines not only drew my attention but sent chills and a sense of foreboding into the recesses of my mind; for some reason this murder felt personal.
“Authorities revealed that the skull belongs to a San Francisco man who has been missing for 3 years. His family and his business partner were unavailable for comment. No motive has yet been unearthed. The rest of his body has yet to be discovered.”
I looked at my college bound daughter with a frown. “What if that was Hank?” My mind whirred. Hank and I had gone to school together in the City. Recently, I had heard that he had been missing for some time. I tried to shake off the sense of foreboding; I couldnt identify it but whatever it was it was in the waiting room with us.
My daughter pulled me away from my dark ponderings. “Sounds like a great CSI case” my daughter said dryly. I’m glad we are going home on the train tonight. That story makes me feel sick to my stomach.
Coming from my daughter, I was surprised. Kaylene was always pragmatic rarely showing emotion. All her emotion was saved for the stage where there was always high drama. And I also noticed her face had gone more pale than usual. “Hmm odd.”
I heard the train whistle in the distance; I too was grateful to be leaving for I knew this murder and the news would consume this small town.
… and here is the beginning of a story I hope to get published this fall. The story is fictional but is inspired by true events that occurred on a recent train trip to Oregon. It was too good to pass up a write…
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5 thoughts on “Killer Headlines – beginning of my short #amwriting”
Can’t wait tor read the full story.
Great beginning! The mystery is well-laid out and already, you got me interested. I hope you continue writing it…
Kind of intriguing… but still needs a bit more punch. I kind of rambled off in my mind about the daughter and college life rather than the intended mystery of the skull found.
The bad part is, I would probably have the same first reaction as the daughter. I watch way too much CSI.
you’ve got me wanting more….