“Come to the shore” said the coaxing voice in the breeze
We offer air its free for you to breathe
quiet,relaxation is offered too
“but what” I worried “will I do”
I cannot blog
twitter’s lost in this fog
“Escape” they said It happens nightly
with my channel changer I do it sprightly
Come one come all join the weekly fun at G-Man’s writing flash fiction
Photography:” Late Summer Cali Coastline” Copyright L. Moon 2011
Beautiful Picture. Your words lure me to the beach and then change the channel ?!?!
A well rhymed well flowing poem! Well done!
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Love the shot of the coastline
who would chose anything over the beach???
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What a lovely place to be! great tale in 55 -thanks.
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Hmmm…
Loved your 55 Leslie
Beautiful Pic.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
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Love the part about how the air is free to breathe.
(If they could figure out a way to charge us, they would.)
I love pictures of the ocean.
Thanks for another Friday 55!
Mine’s here. 🙂
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Sounds like a good idea. Will be escaping this weekend myself.
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hahaha, whimsical surprise at the end there. hope you get to make a real escape soon. 🙂
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I’m going to bed, now, with a sweet smile on my face – THANKS to you…
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Why did it say I (@BruceSallan) was “Anonymous?” – I’m not ANONYMOUS…I am ME! Hear me Roar!
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That’s why beach vacations are called “getaways!”
Gorgeous pic.
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We’ve arevird at the end of the line and I have what I need!
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It’s always a pleasure to hear from someone with expertise.
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An excellent escape.
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Neatly fitted into the 55. I like the twitter reference in particular.
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Love the image, need the break myself. 🙂
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Beautiful picture. Great poem. I especially like the last line.
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I know just what you mean!
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Ah that picture invites to get away from the net for a loooong while, my friend. Beautiful.
🙂
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That was me!
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sounds like a great escape dear, loved the photo, done your work justice xx
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