There they were peeking out from under the green foliage
red against the green so distinct
a little worn but they reminded me of my youth ( laying things here and there)
then your smile joined mine for a moment
your white hair and wrinkles were no disguise for the young heart hidden in the garden
Once again ~ Flash Fiction in 55 words – always a challenge no kinder host will you find in G-Man!
For those of you who regularly visit my site please forgive me for being remiss on my blogsite. I am the throws of publishing and along with that am part of the Kindle Book Review team oh and am gathering speed for my thesis so I am swamped to say the least….
Thanks to Rachel Cowen for the photo of the Red Slippers http://www.flickr.com/photos/curlsdiva/6115881833/
penned in moon dust 
Interesting Moon…
I’m not quite sure I follow, but then again there are many
things that I don’t understand…
Excellent 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
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Hmm too cryptic ??? I saw a pair of red slippers working away in the garden today and then I made eye contact with the dearest face. The eyes seemed to match the slippers in joy at working in the garden on a sunny day ( we live in California so we are still gardening)
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quite cute 55,
sweet memories, love the redness, a happy 55.
Happy Weekend.
Thanks for the visit to my place.
take good care,
you rock.
xoxox
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Beautiful moments captured in the garden. Loved this 55!
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Yes, eyes reveal all, don’t they! Very well said.
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I liked this very much.
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Gardening keeps us young at heart.
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Your heart-age is what truly matters. A very nice 55.
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A very complete story hidden in these well crafted lines.
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Ohhhh, what a wonderful 55. I’m headed off to India Dec 1st for a four month stay, then five days in Korea on my return, after which I have to find a new place to live. All that is left of my belongings ( I really tried to down size ) are in storage.
Your header is gorgeous…could be Montara or somewhere near my Pacifica coast.
My 55 is at:
My 55 is at:
http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/11/friday-flash-55-not-gone-but-forgotten.html#links
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http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/11/participants-talent-show-week-5.html
placed you at poets rally participant talent show section, added you to blog roll,
Thanks a lot for the previous support.
Stay blessed,
Happy Monday.
Feel free to join poets rally this Wednesday or participate at poetry picnic any time,
old poems, poems related to our theme or unrelated are all okay.
no obligations.
😉
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