Dark they fell
wings of death’s foreboding
what do they tell?
“All is lost
lost are they
who venture close
or come this way”
and so a tear
falls with the last
none are left
none at all
Over at Saturday Centus Jenny Matlock’s prompt “I’ve Officially Reached Critical Mass” appropriate considering the asteroid that exploded this week
10 thoughts on “The Raven’s Word #poetry #photography”
Intense and intriguing. Nice one.
This inrcdoutes a pleasingly rational point of view.
Brought to mind Poe.
Lovely …. it has a deep intensity in its rhythm !!!
I love fall but I do kinda feel like your poem when it is done. Very thought provoking.
Powerfully awesome! In a deeply critical intense way! Bravo!
The Ravens made me hear this poem
WOW!! This is an excellent piece of writing here!!
I love your unique style of writing.
This is really intense and lovely.
I actually read this to myself and then read it out loud!
Just powerful word crafting.