The pas de deux
dance of two moving as one
swans in life’s waltz
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swans in life’s waltz
gliding along in their lake
blue glistens diamonds
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blue glistens diamonds
her eyes sparkle at each thought
his nearness quivers
This month Kristjaan is using the Tarot Cards as prompts. Today’s prompt is the Lovers
Photography: “Love me Calla” copyright L. Moon 2011
“Water ripple” L. Moon 2011
I loved the reference to diamonds … a real nice visual imagery 🙂
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Thanks I thought the diamond added that “diamond on her finger” image or in her eyes – don’t think a woman needs a diamond to feel loved
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A nice capture of the emotions of young lovers…well maybe just lovers. 🙂
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Ha thanks for qualifying that Charlie (young and old alike)
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I particularly love the photo of the lilies, ‘moving as swans in life’s waltz’. A beautiful haiku!
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I love the picture of swans as dancers and on a lake so little effort
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so subtly sensuous
beautifully done
Cheers!
JzB
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The flowers are quite sensuous and love has to have a bit …
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Fine photo and verse!
__Now… the swans are tending to their nest; life and love are carried forward. _m
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Thanks your visits always so appreciated and your words like gold
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beautiful poetry and photography
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Thanks this was really a joy to put together the flowers like to show off
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Hi Haiku Poets,Yesterday I posted a brief rreopt from the Seabeck Haiku Getaway, where the Port Townsend Haiku Group gave a reading called Roots and Blooms. Check it out here: . And this afternoon I’m taking off for Bellingham, where I’ll facilitate a weekend retreat called Autumn Light Writing Haiku From Nature’s Sacred Text at Stillpoint at Beckside retreat center. Looking forward to re-joining this conversation on my return.10f8with blessings,Margaret
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Excellent cascading haiku on The Lovers Moondustwriter … just a wonderful read and beautiful imagery. Thank you for sharing this ‘diamond’ with us all here on Carpe Diem.
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I appreciate the prompts you give us and the time you spend
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Ah that was beautyful 🙂
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I love swans / and lovers…
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So lovely, especially that clear water! Actually, I like the tree in your last post too. Very evocative words and images!
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Happiness is like a kiss, you have to give it to share it. A scene of beauty is multiplied by the number of people you share it with.
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yes so true/ thanks for your visit and beautiful words
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