I just got off the plane
heartsick still feels the same
needing you more than yesterday
my sleeve is wet with rain
concealing well my pain
I’m needing you more than yesterday
grasping for reasons why
raising questions to the afternoon sky
and I’m needing you more than yesterday
already tried running away
your smile beckoned me to stay
I’ll always need you more than yesterday
photography “Longest Day” © L. Moon 2013
Great photo. Lovely poem. I love poems where you express your need for another person.
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oh thanks
I love the push and pull between hopelessness and hope
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Strong longing and the longest day a perfect match for a poem.
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oh thanks for connecting that dot for me…
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Lovely
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So full of longing, kiddo. Sigh. “Your smile beckoned me to stay” – I can SEE that smile!
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This poem flows wonderfully. So tender too.
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That growth of love; “needing you more than yesterday.”
Deep feelings!
_m
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glad you felt that
I tend to write this kind of poetry when moody 🙂
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Wait, I cannot fathom it being so straightforward.
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You make things so clear. Thanks for taking the time!
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Lovely poem and the poem put a smile on my face. I enjoy reading more rhyming verses like this.
Cheers
Amit Herlekar
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