Without You #grief #haiku #photography

cemetery rose

tsuka mo ugoke waga naku koe wa aki no kaze
shake! o tomb!

the sound of my wailing

is the wind of autumn

Alone, I began

spring my awakening

autumn sings my song

The Carpe Diem Haiku Kai prompt is Grief. What sounds do you hear in grief?

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7 thoughts on “Without You #grief #haiku #photography”

ranu802 says:

September 4, 2014 at 9:02 am

Thoughtful words, Leslie.

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1. moondustwriter says:
  
  September 4, 2014 at 9:18 am
  
  Thanks Ranu. Hope you are having a beauty filed day
  
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angieinspired says:

September 4, 2014 at 9:40 am

I hear gasping in grief.

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slpmartin says:

September 4, 2014 at 10:31 am

Love the way the two verse blend to create the mood.

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dorannrule says:

September 4, 2014 at 4:00 pm

Amazing interpretations!

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1. moondustwriter says:
  
  September 5, 2014 at 5:03 am
  
  Thanks Doran. This was not an easy haiku to write because I could not feel the words which I usually do. My head was too full of fantasy – knights and kings.
  
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Magyar / Doug says:

September 4, 2014 at 5:27 pm

Ahhh! We hear the song! _m

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