5-7-5 syllables
a season word (kigo)
a cutting word (kireji), mostly interpunction in Western haiku
a moment as short as the sound of a pebble thrown into water
a deeper (spiritual/religious) meaning
*
up along the slopes
under the sun – the goats
were grazing on fire.
on the balcony
standing in a cage of sunbeams –
like a rainbow
something has happened.
the moon lit up the room.
God knew about it.
hear the sighing rain.
I whisper a secret, to reach
all the way in there.
a scene on the platform.
what a strange calm –
the inner voice
© Tomas Tranström (gives some inspiration)
Enter the chamber
song of the fluttering leaves
a holy hush
*
Day and night meet
a scroll of light rolls open
peek at His throne
*
Incapable
writing of your grandeur
I pen a haiku
*
~mdw
I’ve experienced these scenarios this week as the weather changes and the sky goes from blue to black it is truly a moment beyond description and so I write haiku.
The goats were grazing on fire, How can it be? your Haiku is nice.
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I loved the haiku but I wondered that too – thanks Ranu you make me swmile
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I like it when my friend smiles,Leslie.
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Very nicely done! especially liked the first one.
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I like the religious connotations of all the haiku. Fervent and sincere.
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Wow …. just … wow!!!
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Oh…that “holy hush” phrase really struck a chord with me…really enjoyed it all though.
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I agree with the Wow!
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Spectacular!
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Very nice series Leslie … i like that last haiku … just for it’s simplicity as is haiku meant to be.
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