The words sung in a song
conveying 3 minutes of trite
something like
“you looked in my eyes
now its all gone wrong”
*
Wish washy
touch of your hand
electricity is spent
replaced with a sign says “vacant”
over your heart
*
words you once said
attached to a laughter
we were writing love’s chapter
pages are dispersed
and driven over
during the evening rush hour
*
yes,it all meant something once
the roses, the wine, romance
the moonlight dance
where we promised…
that was before
it all froze in the snow
penned in moon dust 
Your poems most of the time have a touch of sadness, they convey the meaning well, I hope you’ll write some happy ones too.
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Oh…this reminds me of someone I thought I knew….once upon a time.
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I really like your rhyme scheme is this one. The first stanza especially hits me. It is a good way of writing a poem about failed love. It is like a hollow love song sometimes. 🙂 I like reading your poetry because it is like a compass for mine. You’re good at it.
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The path of life and love…
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All the things so meaningful in a relationship and when it goes wrong…
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