A lesson from Kristjaan at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai – writing haiku using Basho’s haiku as a template to work from.
For this challenge I have chosen a haiku, you all certainly know, written by Basho (1644-1694).
furu ike ya / kawazu tobi komu / mizu no oto
old pond
a frog jumps into
the sound of water
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

wise spectator
nature plays in autumn’s pond
catch the sound of leaves
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one leaf falls
lands flat with one ripple
in silence
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glorious ripple effect – thanks Brenda
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I love Basho, and yours was great, too. Inspiring…
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You do so good in Haiku. 🙂
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Ive missed writing them lately – been enjoying your poetry 🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
MADE A BIG SLASH WITH ME!!!!
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Ahhh thanks Jonathan
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ORT-ORT!
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An autumn poem perfect for the photo.
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A good one, the sound of leaves..Nicely done.
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There is something about leaves as they fall…
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Like watching bubbles ruse….:)
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Oh wow! 🙂
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Thanks hope you are enjoying your fall
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Awesome revision of this famous haiku by Basho Leslie; very nicely written with a very strong touch of synesthesia
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Beautiful…….. ❤
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