morning glory!
the well bucket-entangled,
I ask for water
© Chiyo-Ni (1703-1775)
pink face welcomes sunny days
tears of heaven, silvery jewels
© mdw 2016
morning glory!
the well bucket-entangled,
I ask for water
rusty pail slips from my hands
listen for the endless bottom
(ok I had to do something fun)
The Tan Renga takes the verse of another (in this case Chiyo-Ni) as inspiration. The poet then adds two lines (7-7) to create a link between the two poets.
Chevrefeuilles Haiku Kai (hosted by Kristjaan Panneman) has prompted another wonderful challenge for spring.
penned in moon dust 
My azaleas bring color and glory to my mornings.
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Wonderful thoughts and image. Greetings!
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The three lines that begins with morning glory, are so vivid, I feel I can see the entangled bucket. It’s awesome. 🙂
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__Another two 7’s, in effectively added. Smiles. _m
this broken bucket rope bail
of this good life rain begins
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I like yours!!!!
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Nicely chained…love those ‘pink faces’
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That was fun…made me wonder how long it took to splash at the bottom.
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What a joy to read your Tan Renga Moondustwriter … long time no see …
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