Feel the Stone #haiku

 

birchand stones

eyes long to touch

spring rain fills the earth’s cup

her long finger caress

There is something about a smooth stone that draws the eyes and the fingers to palpate the pulse of the smooth stone.

This haiku in response to the prompt at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

 

 

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Pot of Gold #haiku #poem

 

Kristjaan Panneman takes a look at Kanshicho form of Haiku with Carpe Diem Haiku Kai:

“I will look at the separate “onji” of “Kanshicho” now and than I will try to explain what Kanshicho was meant to be.

Kan -> means: perception, expression

Shi -> means extravagance, pride, poetry

Cho -> means frivolity, number, butterfly
Kanshi -> means Chinese poetry

As I place those meanings together than Kanshicho means:

A poem in the Chinese way that expresses the extravagance and pride of the poet with the frivolity of the flight of a butterfly. And than Kanshicho starts to come to life. It’s an expression of something which is seen by the poet, a moment as short as the sound of a pebble thrown in to water, in which he/she sees the extravagant beauty  and pride of nature. That extravagance beauty is caught in a three lined verse with the frivolity, (in my opinion frivolity means “not strings attached, free”) of the flight of a butterfly.”

So here’s my shot at unconventional frivolous haiku:

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I’ll never let go

rainbow caresses my cheek

your smile in my hands

Her Soft Caress to my Heart

~She~

Hold me for a moment

feel my warm breath

against your neck

hear me whisper

(something) softly

in your ear


~He~

I held her and felt

the faintest movement of air

I turned and knew

her words were

a soft caress

on

my heart

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