
As I wrote to you these words
tears congealed with blackened ink
this goodbye so hard to write
how I wished I could re-take
*
You went away to war
tore my heart in two
the uniform I sewed
no longer resembles blue
*
A woman fights a war
it’s not with guns and spears
we fight inside ourselves
clinging to what is dear
*
The day I found her lace
I wished it wasn’t so
Perfumed you and adored
it dealt the final blow
*
Tucked beneath her favor
I’m leaving you this note
wrenched from inside you see
our covenant you broke
*
So many times I wished
I’d never seen that thing
for what it made me do
I threw away your ring
*
You wrote to me at length
declared unfailing love
how could you still claim that
with all that had been done
*
On hardened path you did return
a wounded, changed man
stump hidden in your sleeve
I couldn’t grasp your hand
*
The twinkle in those eyes
they still retained that smile
with all that they had seen
over all the bloodied miles
*
I asked about the words
I’d tucked into your shirt
the paper had gone missing
tramped about the dirt
*
I had to brave the lace
you assured that it was gone
no longer fragrant starched
just dirtied torn and brown
*
your crooked smile held back the pain
“I never loved her dear
white favors thrown into the wind
her death ominous and near
*
cannon ball fury pierced the night
she raced injured to save
mercy had all but been undone
we laid her in hollow grave
*
I begged, cried “forgiveness please”
he said ” I owe you none
you are my heart’s strong shielding
a precious gift sent from above”
***
The Daily Post challenge was “Dialogue.” I hope you hear the voices from the past in this poem; a dialogue of pain and hope.
Tomorrow is the 151st anniversary of the bloody battle of Antietam – this a tribute to love, life, and life lost.
Photograph: De la Tour’s “Repentant Magdalene” (from the National Gallery); “The Lost Letter” © L. Moon 2013
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