
Striving Alone
dead the stone grass
no home for me
(this photograph and haiku led to the Villanelle below)
Striving all alone
none can understand
I lie here as a stone
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you hear not my pain’s groan
faint lifting of my hand
striving all alone
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stripped clean like a bone
winter fell upon this land
I lie here as a stone
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love I failed to own
life sifted like the sand
striving all alone
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cold cannot atone
dark heart they call you man
I, silent as a stone
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death has called me home
relieved of golden band
strived this life alone
I lie here as a stone
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This “Little Ones” episode is about the Burmese poetry form ‘Thanbauk’. It consists of three lines of four syllables each. Traditionally, they are full of humor. It also has a rhyme in it. The rhyme is on the fourth syllable of the first line, the third syllable of the second, and on the second syllable of the third.
X X X A
X X A X
X A X X*
The highly structured villanelle is a nineteen-line poem with two repeating rhymes and two refrains. The form is made up of five tercets followed by a quatrain. The first and third lines of the opening tercet are repeated alternately in the last lines of the succeeding stanzas; then in the final stanza, the refrain serves as the poem’s two concluding lines. Using capitals for the refrains and lowercase letters for the rhymes, the form could be expressed as: A1 b A2 / a b A1 / a b A2 / a b A1 / a b A2 / a b A1 A2.
Carpe Diem’s freestyle prompt Lonely Flower