I was asked to do this alone
swim the ocean
while they all watched me
carrying a stone
*
lap by lap each travail
those I thought I loved
held their breath
waiting for me to fail
*
society wills the fall
no program teaches me to swim
empty promises thrown my way
til many are nothing at all
*
I was asked to do this alone
swim the ocean
while they all watched
me
carrying a stone
Poetry allows a writer to say things he/she would be criticized for saying. Suffice it to say I easily as a divorced, unemployed, uninsured, mother (did I mention homeless) could have drown in the “system.” Fortunately, I had a role model who, rather than depend on a system that makes one weak, struck out into the ocean alone.
My hand, filled with compassion, goes out to those who have had to swim in the sea of adversity with nothing but their determination to make it.
The WordPress Daily Post Challenge offered a great prompt for today “Sink or Swim”
Cheers to the others who are staying afloat:
- Russian Accordionist | Photos to inspire you
- Perseverance | The Magic Black Book
- Sink or Swim | Geek Ergo Sum
- Persist | thinkerscap
- Sink, Swim or Fly | The Ambitious Drifter
- Endure | Momma Said There’d Be Days Like This
- Alone Again Naturally | Finale to an Entrance
- DEPRESSED OPTIMIST + PAINTS + BRUSHES | Standing Ovation, Seated
- The deep end of the pool | RPMAS
- PROMPT: Sink or Swim | AvaLlea’s Blog
- Silent Agony… | paperdollsletter
- Doing The Right Thing Can Leave You Lonely | The Jittery Goat
- I said loudly, in my best English tourist voice, “Does this go to…” | thoughtsofrkh
- True beauty | Veni, vici, vidi
- The Tow Truck Driver Drove a Chariot
- Daily Prompt: Sink or Swim | Awl and Scribe
- God’s Grace | A mom’s blog
- Sinking not an option for cowards | crookedeyebrows
- Women in East : One Perspective ! | Dreams to Reality !
- Winter Water | The Ring Lady
- Daily Prompt: Sink or Swim – A migrant’s story | littlegirlstory
- Daily Prompt: Sink or Swim | Finding Life
- Whatever It Takes | Lori’s Life and Other Stuff
- Sink or swim? | Motherhood and Beyond
- Daily Prompt: Sink or Swim – My Car Buying Experience | The Story of a Guy
- When life steals your lemons… | Words
- Perseverance in Harness | Kansa Muse
- Daily Prompt: Sink or Swim | Chronicles of an Anglo Swiss
- Sink or Swim? So limiting… | It’s my blog, innit…
- Even a Fool Can See | Not a Punk Rocker
- Learning Patience… | Haiku By Ku
- Daily Prompt: Sink or Swim | Basically Beyond Basic
- Daily Prompt: Dive! Dive! Dive! | One Starving Activist
- The debate | Life is great
- “By Myself” | Active Army Wife
- DP Challenge: Sink or Swim « Morning Pages
- Tree Trials | It’s a wonderful F’N life
- Sink or Swim? | mineisdee
- Daily Prompt: Sink or Swim/ Out on my Own | The Smallest of Stars
- Sing or Swim – Compass & Quill
- Sink or Swim | Bright Tuesday
- Drown or paddle | LauGraEva
- ALONE WITH SHAME | Emotional Fitness
- Daily Prompt: Scar | Morrighan’s Muse
- At The End Of My Last Dime! | *Recovery Ramblins Blog Of ~ Author Catherine Lyon*
- Blue Loft
- The Glowing Tree | Broken Light: A Photography Collective
- Glub, glub, glub … (sink or swim) | I Didn’t Just Wake Up This Morning with a Craving
- Extreme business as usual | Le Drake Noir
- Treading Water | A Good One