Alone #poetry #photography

No where do I belong

Empty as watery space

Alone a big place

No where do I belong

Alone a big watery space

When you are gone

No where do I belong

Empty as alone in space

The form base of the poem is the Triolet that I then worked off of to spin integral meaning between the photograph and the poem.

Please respect copyright of these original works belonging to artist and poet ~ L. Moon

Author: moondustwriter

Thank you for visiting Moondustwriter. One of the many exciting things I've had the honor of doing is writing and publishing in multiple genres (including education) in E. African for E. Africa. As a writer, it is a thrill to write for children (on all continents) who want to learn. I've been part of the blogging community for more than 13 years. Some old timers may remember the award winning (2011 Twitter Shorty ) blog community - One Stop Poetry. I was the co-producer of that fast growing blog community. I am a published writer, poet, artist and photographer. I have written, as well as edited, for periodicals, radio, blogs and fellow writers. There are many facets to this moon - my joy is in meeting you! View all posts by moondustwriter

9 thoughts on “Alone #poetry #photography”

slpmartin says:

January 14, 2013 at 2:40 pm

A most apt characterization of ‘loneliness’.

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Joseph Pinto says:

January 14, 2013 at 4:12 pm

Lonely becomes beauty thanks to you, Leslie

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1. moondustwriter says:
  
  January 15, 2013 at 8:17 am
  
  There is a beauty in all states of being. Perhaps we should embrace “them” more and fear them less. (Oh no I’m starting off 2013 in philosophical thought)
  
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  1. Joseph Pinto says:
    
    January 15, 2013 at 8:27 am
    
    Damn you and your philosophy lol ;P
    
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  2. moondustwriter says:
    
    January 17, 2013 at 2:31 pm
    
    Then I’m damned…
    
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Green Speck says:

January 14, 2013 at 8:53 pm

Beautifully rendered …

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wolfsrosebud says:

January 15, 2013 at 6:07 am

really connected with this… great job!

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Vincenzo says:

July 23, 2013 at 2:26 pm

Yes, Marybeth, I like this revision. On first rnadieg, I imagine listening to the rain. But when I read it again, I realize that the listening could refer to many things the rain, or music with rain in the background, or listening for a car to turn in the driveway, or This poem expands every time I read it.P.S. Will be thinking of you tomorrow, sending prayers & best wishes your way.

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