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One day from Japan to Guam, a P-3 crew of 12 flew into a tempest. In the face of death, some grasped for metal others crumpled straws; I held to confidence in my God. For hours we were tossed like a mere play thing; it seemed impossible that a craft could hold together against such force. As the storm lifted and just above the ocean we drifted, we beheld the most glorious image. All of nature awakened beneath a glorious, golden halo: Whales blew plumes of water, dolphins played on the surface, flying fish pirouetted in a dance with the waves.
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eye of the storm
man clings to any hope
nature’s beauty emerges
I can’t paraphrase what the journey committed to God is like. For each pilgrim it is different. But this one thing I can say – no matter the sorrow, no matter the pain when the storm has passed there’s a beauty unclaimed.
The prompt at Poet’s United is “Committed.” What are you committed to no matter the cost?
“A Glimpse to the other side” is a more complete “story” that I wrote several years ago logging this day.
Thanks for the backstory on the poem…it is quite lovely in several respects.
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Yes, there is definitely a Divine hand at work in these situations. Very interesting poem and skilfully expressed.
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I truly believe commitment takes us to the golden halo, despite the storm…this is a beautiful Haibun Leslie…
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I loved your description and the Haiku. 🙂
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After a storm like that, I’d be dancing with nature too! Very nice!
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This is beautiful, Leslie and I love the story you wrote about it even more. You make me see that shimmering beauty as clearly as if I had seen it myself.
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Absolutely gorgeous writing Leslie ❤
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Gosh! Commitment is on every level of this poem–it has no beginning and no end, and we’re never alone. We might copy the water creatures and celebrate our immersion!
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I love the idea of immersion with the sea life – like rebirth.
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What a beautiful story. The sight after the storm must have been like a devine reassurance. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Moonie, a grand air borne haibun_!
__ What remains, is the hope of passing through that storm’s eye, and gain that eye’s renewal of faith, to face the other side. _m
storms eye
we grasp our stable faith
holding course
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oh I really like your haiku. There is a reassurance when you have passed through the eye of a storm isnt there?
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Beautiful poem, and love the story behind it. In each journey, there may be storms but it is hope that can get us through it all. It is then that we appreciate the calm after the storm so much more 🙂
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You are so right Mabel – thanks.
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That is an amazing experience.. great story.
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It was cool to revisit it after talking with some pilots this week.
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
GOOD MESSAGE AND MEDIA USEAGE! LOVED IT!
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Clearly a life-changing experience!
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Our eyes certainly see the beauty of life after an experience such as this. If only we could hold thatscene for the rest of our lives to always comfort us. Beautifully told.
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Wow! Wonderful in inspiration, gorgeous in composition
Much love…
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Thanks for sharing your story. Love your hopeful words.
Anna :o]
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What a miraculous experience – and poem – not many of us have to endure such moments but there is a kind of ultra-reality feeling when life is on an edge that a whale plume seems to highlight – the world always has a way of helping us perhaps..or maybe when we are ready we see the good things for ourselves
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Yes, a commitment to God…the strongest commitment indeed! He will see us through the storms of life.
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Wow…what a journey and experience, Leslie! Fragile and pristine as a dewdrop! Loved this! ❤
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when the storm has passed
there’s a beauty unclaimed.
No matter how much one’s life is put to test belief in divine power will accord that confidence of always being under His protection. Very true Moonie!
Hank
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